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Tochi



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PostSubject: Kurenai (Lemme introduce you all to POETRY)   20.11.08 19:16

alright lemme show yall what POETRY is suppose to look like...here is a 3 in 1 poem to start things off...they're three different poems but string into each other so perfectly...and since Lynn seems to be such a popular inspirational force...here Lynn...this is for you ;p lols


Kurenai: Urgency to Exist

Envenom, entice, eternally so,
Everlasting envy to me you endow.
And eventually, you'll evade me again,
Exit this escapade and enter the end.

I long to be found but still I am lost,
To find love again at eternity's cost.
For you each breath i attempt to inhale,
And for you my heart will painfully fail.

Amazing what power will do to your time,
Our distance builds each passing rhyme.
For you i wish i could seize it all,
And for you I'd allow my power to fall.

How I wait for your return,
And in my heart our love shall burn.
For it is your love I have truly missed,
I love you my dear, in my urgency to exist.


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Kurenai: To Tempt an Angel

Again I attempt to abduct your love,
My angel I adore in our heavens above.
Yet all in all, I am left alone,
In the absence of authority I alone shall atone.

Broken I am and whole I am not,
And in this darkness my heart has forgot.
What strength you bring and what warmth you give,
And to prove my love I'll continue to live.

And with my words I'll sway you once more,
To seduce your heart the same as before.
Tell me princess, this isn't pretend,
A whole new world, that we'll dream again.

Let it be real, let me have this chance,
We'll chase the stars and in the heavens we'll dance.
So take my hand, my left and my right,
To tempt an angel to fall in love tonight.


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Kurenai: Let Love be Blind

And sin we shall to our silent song,
Sing my siren our love so wrong.
Seduce me slowly with your striking eyes,
And sink this ship of love with lies.

Why must love discriminate so,
If my feelings are wrong, then how would I know?
Could you per chance, feel the same?
Does your heart flutter at the mention of my name?

What must i do to capture your heart?
I can paint a book but I can't speak art.
I love you my darling, you're everything to me,
Yet why is it that your eyes cannot see?

Foolish are people to claim they are right,
Loving alone with their ability of sight.
In love I am lost but I hope you will find,
To let your heart see...and let love be blind.


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PostSubject: Re: Kurenai (Lemme introduce you all to POETRY)   20.11.08 19:55

Everyone, this is why we have a poetry section.

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PostSubject: Re: Kurenai (Lemme introduce you all to POETRY)   20.11.08 22:02

lols

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thanks Fendy...and if anyone would like to test their mettle...feel free to try to top my writing...will just keep me trying harder ;]
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PostSubject: Re: Kurenai (Lemme introduce you all to POETRY)   21.11.08 7:53

WAH WEEE!!!
I am so touched~
And my english will never be that deep =(
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PostSubject: Re: Kurenai (Lemme introduce you all to POETRY)   21.11.08 8:48

lols thanks Miin darling ;]
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PostSubject: Re: Kurenai (Lemme introduce you all to POETRY)   21.11.08 10:33

Your Welcome Tochi <33
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PostSubject: Re: Kurenai (Lemme introduce you all to POETRY)   05.12.08 23:49

man this is great poetry i may be a little good at poetry but i will never be a good as u
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